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| Gryphon's sprites; Looking for a critque | |
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| Topic Started: Jan 18 2010, 03:51 PM (192 Views) | |
| Chaz Natlo | Jan 27 2010, 02:34 AM Post #16 |
Something witty...
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Right, with that out of the way... You biggest issue right now is your necks. the necks on sprites 5 and 6-5 are much too long. sprite 3 needs to be shaded under the chin, but the placement is good, it looks like you trimmed back the collar on sprite 4, sprite 6-3 might do with a little trimming on the turtle neck (it appears to be cut upwards towards the back, so either raise the black closer to the chin, lower it and show more skin towards the back) and sprite 6-4's head could do with a nudge to the right (she's facing more closely to full front, so her chin should be closer (though not exactly at, she's still angled a touch) to the centre of the neck. |
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